I liked the writings on the wall of all the emotions she was feeling. It was cool how the band itself was playing and I liked how at the end the man was pushed into the pool to give that "drowning" feel. I do wonder what the phone call was about to make her so mad.
The video definitely showed anger and it was presented in the right way. Writing all of those words in the book and on the wall made it clear how she felt.
Nice variety of shots of the band. The shots of her writing on the wall were also really emotionally well done. I couldn't read everything she was writing in her notebook, though which bothered me. Maybe some tighter shots of the notebook would have helped.
This video was actually really well thought up. The shots of the band playing in the tent were great and the fact that this was just about the only point where color was being utilized was a creative technique.
I thought you guys did a great job. I liked that the shots of the band were in color, and the shots of her were not. There was one shot of her that was in color, and that kind of confused me. I really liked how you incorporated her writing out her feelings in the notebook and on the wall. It was obvious that she was feeling those things, but it really helped to drive the point home. This may be a bit ridiculous, but the shots of the band where you could see the chandelier on the ceiling were great except for that chandelier. It just kept catching my attention. Overall, great work!
I really liked the writing on the wall, it portrayed how she was feeling and her emotions well. Some of the acting felt staged and not very genuine, like the scene in the backyard. I did enjoy the close ups of the band playing.
Great job everyone! The editing, camera work, and story execution were all very strong. I enjoyed the camera angles and the location of the band playing. The changing colors in the room was very visually interesting. I liked the play with color in editing, and how you used that to show the story's concept even further. I kind of wanted a little more variety in scenes with the woman. I got a little bored with it always going back to her just in the bar writing in her journal. Other than that, great work!
Interesting Camera angles, certainly made the video appealing to watch. Some extreme close ups of her face being upset would have been nice though. Overall I feel more shots showing her upset/pissed would have been great and given me a stronger connection to her story.
Loved the heavy bass portion being coupled with her scribbling in her notepad. Drowning inside part, I'd liked to have seen the wall longer, cuts away a bit too quickly. On top of that the wall is shown rather extensively, if you had close up shots to work with, I would have liked to see those sprinkled in where you used the wall.
The song is great; full of emotion. and I believe you guys ddid a great job of producing emotion through the words and actions but... the only thing that really bothered me was at the beginning, your talent kind of over sold her emotions. I feel like she shook her head to much and it kinda made it "cheesy". Had she done it throughout the entrée video it might have been too distracting. The last scene though was very well portrayed. I like how the color was added to the last scene. It said "things just got real" without really says it.
I really enjoyed the shots of the bands performing and how you integrated them with the rest of the video. You did a great job portraying how we can get caught up with the paranoia inside of us. Writing her feelings out on the wall and in the notebook was a great way to show what's going on inside her mind without her having to tell us.
Your concept was very well executed! I really liked the "studio" shots with the lighting and silhouettes. Great work!
ReplyDeleteThe coloring choice was great. Nice job syncing the audio to the live action band. It was nicely done. Great job.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the shots of the band preforming! The editing was done very well too! Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI liked the writings on the wall of all the emotions she was feeling. It was cool how the band itself was playing and I liked how at the end the man was pushed into the pool to give that "drowning" feel. I do wonder what the phone call was about to make her so mad.
ReplyDeleteThe video definitely showed anger and it was presented in the right way. Writing all of those words in the book and on the wall made it clear how she felt.
ReplyDeleteNice variety of shots of the band. The shots of her writing on the wall were also really emotionally well done. I couldn't read everything she was writing in her notebook, though which bothered me. Maybe some tighter shots of the notebook would have helped.
ReplyDeleteThis video really suited the genre while still retaining a sense of interest and ingenuity. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteThis video was actually really well thought up. The shots of the band playing in the tent were great and the fact that this was just about the only point where color was being utilized was a creative technique.
ReplyDeleteVery cool job, i liked the band performing and the color changing, i also liked the end when she pushed the man into the pool. Good job
ReplyDeleteI thought you guys did a great job. I liked that the shots of the band were in color, and the shots of her were not. There was one shot of her that was in color, and that kind of confused me. I really liked how you incorporated her writing out her feelings in the notebook and on the wall. It was obvious that she was feeling those things, but it really helped to drive the point home. This may be a bit ridiculous, but the shots of the band where you could see the chandelier on the ceiling were great except for that chandelier. It just kept catching my attention. Overall, great work!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the writing on the wall, it portrayed how she was feeling and her emotions well. Some of the acting felt staged and not very genuine, like the scene in the backyard. I did enjoy the close ups of the band playing.
ReplyDeleteGreat job everyone! The editing, camera work, and story execution were all very strong. I enjoyed the camera angles and the location of the band playing. The changing colors in the room was very visually interesting. I liked the play with color in editing, and how you used that to show the story's concept even further.
ReplyDeleteI kind of wanted a little more variety in scenes with the woman. I got a little bored with it always going back to her just in the bar writing in her journal. Other than that, great work!
Cool vid, liked the concept, enjoyed the music.
ReplyDeleteInteresting Camera angles, certainly made the video appealing to watch. Some extreme close ups of her face being upset would have been nice though. Overall I feel more shots showing her upset/pissed would have been great and given me a stronger connection to her story.
Loved the heavy bass portion being coupled with her scribbling in her notepad. Drowning inside part, I'd liked to have seen the wall longer, cuts away a bit too quickly. On top of that the wall is shown rather extensively, if you had close up shots to work with, I would have liked to see those sprinkled in where you used the wall.
The song is great; full of emotion.
ReplyDeleteand I believe you guys ddid a great job of producing emotion through the words and actions but...
the only thing that really bothered me was at the beginning, your talent kind of over sold her emotions. I feel like she shook her head to much and it kinda made it "cheesy". Had she done it throughout the entrée video it might have been too distracting.
The last scene though was very well portrayed. I like how the color was added to the last scene. It said "things just got real" without really says it.
Really enjoyed this one. A lot of great cinematography and editing. Especially how color was added and removed from specific scenes.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the shots of the bands performing and how you integrated them with the rest of the video. You did a great job portraying how we can get caught up with the paranoia inside of us. Writing her feelings out on the wall and in the notebook was a great way to show what's going on inside her mind without her having to tell us.
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